Ek anath bacche ka apni “maa” ko..
Ek pukaar,
Ek laachar bhikaari ka ek “ameer” ko..
Ek pukaar,
Ek shishya ka apne “guru” ko..
Ek pukaar,
Ek bhakt ka apne “bhagwaan” ko..
Ek pukaar,
Ek naukar ka apne “malik” ko..
Ek pukaar,
Ek bekasur ka nirdayi “samaaj” ko..
This world is full of so many illusions,
These illusions lead me to so many confusions,
“Why should we be someone else’s slave, when they too are human like us?
Why do we pray to someone whose existence we cannot even prove?
Why are we answerable to someone who has no right over our life?”
And after much contemplation, I could come to just one conclusion,
“Jeena yahan, marna yahan, iske siva jaana kahan...”
These illusions lead me to so many confusions,
“Why should we be someone else’s slave, when they too are human like us?
Why do we pray to someone whose existence we cannot even prove?
Why are we answerable to someone who has no right over our life?”
And after much contemplation, I could come to just one conclusion,
“Jeena yahan, marna yahan, iske siva jaana kahan...”
P.S. : The reader is requested to please pardon the writer if this post didn't make any sense to him/her.. :)
15 comments:
first to read:) first to comment:)
it did make a lot of sense to me...:) n i loved the first part:))
thank u..i reli didn't kno wat 2 do abt d 2nd part, so i just edited it a bit :)
बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत रचना लिखा है आपने! सुंदर भाव और अभिव्यक्ति के साथ लिखी हुई आपकी ये रचना दिल को छू गई!
This is a nice one........never imagined any one could express his/her feelings in such a beautiful manner......well done.... :)
@ babli: bahut bahut dhaniyavad :)
@ meghana: thank u..
well nicely put contemplations...
we live in such ignorant world na ...
hum kuch soche bina hi sab kuck kar lete hai..
hume jagruk karne ke liye dhyanavaad...
but one thing i hv learnt is .... JIYO JEE BHAR KE...
thank u vaidhei...i think d post did make sense to you :)
hey how did i miss commenting on this??
I loved the Pukaar part very much....
If you give one more thought to it, i think you can add few more pukaar to it...
one more thing, tha last two additions...i.e pukaar to maalik and samaaj has something that seems incomplete to me..
when a child calls for mother, or a bhakta calls for god...there is need for love, help etc..
But in this two cases..it is somethign diff..donno..may be i am wrong ..
Keep writing umesh :)
@ mahesh: buddy if you read carefully, the child is an orphan, who thinks that the woman it is referring to as its mother, is actually not- an illusion. And a call to God by a bhakt - whether there is God or not- a confusion :)
Hope u got the connection :)...keep visiting :)
Hmmmmm pretty much i got it :)
oye!! lovely new luk!!:) n thankooooooooo for the cute award!!!:)))its so kool!!:)
thnx buddy! scraps of bread is honoured!
:)
This is a beautiful post !! Words are really fantastic !! Thanks for sharing..Unseen Rajasthan
@ unseen rajasthan :thanx a lot, and welcome to the blog :)
gud one...bt m not able to understand....whts the realation between all the illusions and the final conclusion...
Well there is no actual constructive conclusion...all the illusions confusions have no answer actually..and can't be decoded and life has to move on. Hence the line "Jeena yahaan, marna yahaan, iske siva jaana kahaan..."
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