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SUSPENSE PARTY

For first Part please visit : Vaidhei-Secretword and only then continue reading this post...
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Scene 4: 09.35 PM

Characters involved: Rohit, Umesh and Mitesh.

The Secret has been told.
Umesh: You are joking right?
Rohit  : (Expecting that reaction) It is true Umesh. There’s nothing you or me can do about it.
Umesh: But it’s not possible…it just can’t be true…I refuse to believe it….


THE SECRET:
          It was supposed to be Vaidhei’s Birthday Party. But alas! It wasn’t to be. Every guest had to pay for their own dinner. It wasn’t Vaidhei’s Birthday at all. But the question is – Who did this? Who made fifty people gather at one place for a party which wasn’t one? Everyone who came to know about the secret was perplexed. And the secret was spreading fast like a fire. Something had to be done soon…before it was too late..
Soon the cheerful mood of the party became sour. A fight had broken out. Umesh had spread the news. It became very ugly…
Before


                                                                         
After

                                       


Scene 5: 10.08 PM

Characters involved: Mitesh, Umesh, Vaidhei, Rimple, Forum, Rohit and Amit.


To resolve the issue, everyone turned to the alleged “Birthday Girl”- Vaidhei. They pleaded and even went to the extent of touching her feet to bail them out. They didn’t want to wash plates for the rest of the evening!!


Vaidhei, thinking to herself, “A bigger secret lies ahead. One which only me and one other person knows…”


Scene 6: 10.15 PM



 Finally, after much consideration, Vaidhei agreed to bail them out. The party WAS on her now!! How generous of her…! Everybody heaved a sigh of relief, which is evident from the smile on the faces of the characters in the photograph.


The Secret Retold

Characters involved: Vaidhei, Tushar


Earlier in the Evening, Vaidhei seems to have slipped in a word to Tushar, something which caught his attention. What did she say? Did it have anything to do with the Secret?





 Vaidhei and Tushar celebrate as Rohit and Umesh look on. It was a prank played by Vaidhei and Tushar. There was a party after all!! It seems that the Birthday Girl was in mood of some fun! “I will make them all touch my feet!” that’s what Vaidhei had told Tushar at the beginning of the party.





23 comments:

Lolz.....Ladki ke pair chuye tum logo ne.. :P :P Cheee..chee... ;) ;)

Good one... very well planned it was... but at at points, it seemed all planned to act and all but its ok..that is part of acting :P

Keep blogging :)

 

Dude thanx a lot...but let me tell you..it wasn't planned at all! after the party when we were looking at the snaps, we found them really funny and thought of making a story out of it..it started with the 1st pic on vaidhei's blog..from there the story just went along...unbelievable but true...

 

Haha...i knew something was cooking.... :) Good one umesh :)

 

Lovely post.Wish you and your family a very happy and prosperous Diwali.

 

thanx again mahesh

thanx babli...Happy Diwali to you too...

 

LOl! That was fun! And gives me an idea for something coming up :D
Good going! :)

 

actually...yar..nw its looking like we had already planned.. it.... bt m finding it better thn the expectations....

 

hehhehe!! loved it...both the parts...:)
well blended...:) esp the pix!!!!

@ mahesh: ladki ke pair choona chee chee ...accha...!??!!!??[ raises eyebrows} :P

 

n btw wer is the superior scribbler award haaan?????grrrr

 

@ shaunak:
I know it was a lot of fun..! n i we have the copyright for this..pay us royalty!! :p

 

@ Rohit:
Arre people will feel that it was planned coz its hard to imagine that it wasn't..but ppl r liking it!!...n yes it is better that what v expected! :)

 

@ Divsi:
thanx a lot...n award hai to sahi, aankhon se dekho!!:p (sorry yaar..dunno how i missed dat!)

 

One question... Why ur profile pic is of that kid and not you...?

 

just like that...i thought that the pic would match with the title of the blog...;)

 

In that case my blog's title matches with something which i cant even reveal but still i have put up my pic :p Rakhdo apni pic..ab itna bhi sharmana kya... ;)

 

followers ke list mein jo tumhari pic aate hai na..woh bahut achchi hai...woh laga do..if u changed ur mind :)

 

well.. amazing idea.. all credit goes to umesh, rohit and vai..
bt lemme tell u nw d actual suspense of the party.. the real one.. for which i ws petrified..
actuli.. vai agreed to pay for tht wonderful party onli on 1 condition..
she actuli bribed sir to giv her a week long vacation..!!!
and sir thot,, wht a silly gal, such a gr8 party jus for a vacation!!!
lolzzzz....

 

@ mahesh : lol...n i think il listen to u n change d pic :)

@ rimple : thanx a lot..credit reli goes to rohit..hes d director..vai n myself r just d producers n distributors ;)(with a little of input from us as well :p)...n well as for ur suspense..its 2 good...y didn't we think of it?!!...v underestimated u i guess :p...

 

very funny han..
u guys din evn temme tht ur mkin ny kind of such movie.. else.. ths wud hv been a super duper hit of the year..;)
n u hv put ma pics on ur much famous blog.. tht too those stupid ones.. did i gv u tht copyright;):p

 

The story is definately very well executed..Your combined hard work shows...
Vai rocked as usual.. :)
Rohit's filmy side added to ur strength..Dude y r u doin CA?! :)
Umesh your story telling was nice..Lets have some short stories in ur blog in addition to poems..Lookin fwd to it..Cheers!!

 

@ rimple : super duper hit kya? sapne dekhte reh...n abt ur pics...NO COMMENTS! :p...keep visiting :)

 

DONT KNOW Y... BT M DOING CA...

 

@ amit : thanx a lot...ya i agree...rohit's filmy side had a very big role to play.....n abt short stories..well a couple of them are in progress :)...keep visiting...

@ rohit : I know why u r doing CA... well pet bharne ke liye kuch toh karna padega na..! ;).