It was the peak of the Himalayas . There was no sign of any living soul for miles. A man, suddenly appearing from nowhere, walking with all his strength, probably breathing his last, somehow managed to utter his final words, “I am the last…”
It was the 21st of December 2012 – the end of the world.
30 comments:
wow!!! its rainin 55 fiction isnt it:)) hehe
lovely first attempt ya...:)
n a different topic too...end of the world...i thot he wud be a ski-guy:p
lol
ya i know :)...n thanx a lot...hopefully i'l come up with a few more of these...its fun to write them ;)
hey good 1.. quite innovative idea to write jus in 55 words..keep writing n i'll keep visiting..:)
Lets hope this remains a fiction onli...lol...good work..
@ rimple : thanks..but it isn't my idea..quite a few bloogers do it...iv just picked the idea and made my own story :)...n do keep visiting :)
@ amit : lol...thanx n ya I hope it just remains a fiction..n if at all it does turn out to be true, I would want to be that last man! :p
I donno what to say..
that 2012 thing takes my breath away sometimes. i mean its too early for us to die :P isnt?
Anyways, a good attempt umesh..
m waitin for u to change ur profile pic :P
Aila!!! 2012??? Isn't that a tad bit too early for the world to end!!?? *worried* ;)
First attempt??
Quite imaginative, gotta say.
Keep 'em coming. :)
Cheers
And oh!!
My recation on seeing the header pic - "Wooohoo!!!!!"
I think that conveys what I wanted to. :)
Cheers
@ mahesh : thanx...n ya I know its very early for us to die :( ... n about the profile pic, it will be done soon ;)
@ bondgal : welcome to the blog...n thanx a lot...n well the profile pic is not going to be d same anymore!...got bored of it :)...keep visiting :)
That was *reaction back there and not whatever I typed.;)
And no no, I was talking about the header pic of the blog, not the dp.
lol...ohkk...i love it too..and as for the spelling mistake, the human brain does not process such minor mistakes! (not mine atleast! ;)
Thanks for chanding the profile pic...it felt as if i am valued :P
lol...your welcome :)...keep visiting and keep giving suggestions...they are of utmost importance :p
नाइस पोस्ट।
वैज्ञानिक दृष्टिकोण अपनाएं, राष्ट्र को प्रगति पथ पर ले जाएं।
@ arshiya( I hope i got that correctly!)...welcome to the blog and thanx for dropping by...keep visiting :)
Thanks a lot for your lovely comments. You are welcome in my other blogs too.
Your blog is one of my favourite as each and every post of yours is nice and interesting. What a lovely picture. Fantastic shot.
Nice! It really is raining 55 fiction :D
What your story implies is that even though it might look like the peak of the Himalayas, it really may not be so...Flash freezing y'know..
Watch "The Day the Earth Stood Still"
I dig that concept.
Nice first take on 55 fiction.
Cheers!
Wow! Umesh, I just so loved reading your 55 fiction.The thought which is put across through your story is very intriguing can actually be read in several ways.
Also I am really happy to have you visit my blog and will keep on dropping in here as well.
Cheers!
You know I kind of feel a deep connect with the word silence. I find it to be a very potent state of being, devoid of much more than just words and sounds.Hence I was really excited on reading the title of your blog.
@ babli : thanx a tonne for ur kind words...n as for ur other blogs, will surely visit them...keep visiting :)
@ shaunak : I told ya!...take out ur umbrellas! :p ... thanx n keep visiting!
@ grace : welcome to the blog, n im glad u liked d story n found meaning to it as well! ;)
As for the word 'silence' ... u have really described very well..dats reli how i am (divsi can vouch for dat i guess!)... and the title of the blog was suggested by divsi..so all credit goes to her..! :) ... keep visiting...
P.S.: I loved your blog too...
Ecrit merveilleux
added charm to your blog....
liked it very much
good going !!!!!!!
after knowing the meaning of the title..i liked it very much...a very big thing, very well put in 55 words...gud one...
@ vaidhei : u know my french is weak!...but i presume u have written something nice :p ...thanx n keep visiting :)
@ rohit : thanx a lot..glad u likd it :)
I immediately get with the title "The End" that its goin to be ... End of the World
Its small but full. I can feel with each word whats the feeling of that person is and thats what mportant in story writing and that too in so little words.
keep it up.
@ mitesh: thanks a lot...nice to see you commenting again :)
Keep visiting..
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