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Barsaat...



Ye bin mausam barsaat,

Na jaane kyun dila gayi un suhane dinon ki yaad,

Kya jadoo hai in baarish ki boondon ka,

Jo un lamhon ko taaza kar gayi barson ke baad ….

35 comments:

Oho aha ki gal baadshao:p kis di yaad aa rahi hai? :D shravani ya koppikar

 

maarna mat plz I cudnt resist;) tu post hi aehoje karda hai:p

 

Wow..Thats great...

one correction dude, i feel the 3rd line looks more appropriate as " Kya jadoo hai in baarish ki boondon mein"

Good one...:)

 

shravani?? Kaun hai woh... kaun hai woh... *staring with narrow eyes* lolz :)

 

hmmm hmmm..:P apko kiski yaad aa rahi hai.. roz to milte ho..:)))):P..
sry isme meera koi kasoor nahi..:P:);)
LOLZZ!!
bt nice one..n vry nice pic..
keep writin..

 

hey.. nice one.....
Ab ye barsat rahe sirf boondo me simit ye hai faryad....
aisa na ho ke ye ban jaye tufan ka karan.. aur hum sab, bas ek yad...

 

tip tip paani toh barsa lekin yaadien bhi barsa gaya....
hmmmm me gettin gooosebumps nw...
maan kar raha hai lonavala jaau...

 

@ divsi : le! menu ki miluga tenu markar...par mere ton zyada tu yaad kardi hai shravani aur koppikar nu! :p...ki gal hai..dostana inni pasand aa gayi...! :p

 

@ mahesh : thanks a lot for pointing out the mistake...actually wrote it on d spur of the moment...got carried away by the weather i think! ;)...well after reading your comment I thought i'l edit d post but then ur comment would look out of place..so I'l just let it remain as it is...
An as for shravani, don't listen to divsi...she just needs a reason to bring that up!!

 

@ rimple: glad you liked it...and I think you should check your spellings!...you were as it is weak with ur 'E' ki matra...:p

 

@ rohit:
Tufan ka khatra ab dhal chuka hai,
mausam ab badal chuka hai,
Do dinon ki is barsaat ki jagah,
ab suraj ka prakop le chuka hai!!

Keep visiting :)

 

@ vaidhei : goosebumps haan? thats a big compliment :)...but lonavla?! itni garmi me?? :p...

 

i like writin mera as meera..
evn u do..nw don lie ok..:))))):P
n don pretend tht u din understnd.. do sach ka samna..:);P

 

what can i say now except.. awesome yar...!!!

 

@ rimple : who said I didn't understand...I toh was just pointing out ur mistake...n u like writing mera as meera?...well either u r too obsessed with urself that u like to stress on d 'e' or ur just plain weak in Hindi...kitna mila tha 12th me??

 

@ rohit : thanks a lot yaar..:)

 

well.. i ws scholar in hindi.. n btw its ma style to write mera as meera.. its jus for u dear.. spl frn na..:))))
okk.. nw.. y r u cribbin.. accept it.. chill.. nw no more comments on meera comment..

 

@ rimple : I'm so obliged that you consider me as your special friend! thank you so much for this honour! :p...acha no more comments on that comment...vl fight on gmail! ;)

 

@ mahesh: he's another hr yaar:) lolzz n bout shravani I l tell ya on fb shhhhhhh not here:p hehe

@ prince: na main inna nai yaad kardi. Jado Mera dost aehoji shayari likhda hai menu aap aap dikh jaunda hai oh kinnanu yaad kar rya hega:p

 

@ rimple.: kripya drishti daale :p roz mr. shayar kin ko milte hai? :p hehe

 

वाह वाह क्या बात है! लाजवाब और शानदार शायरी! बारीश का मौसम सभी को अच्छा लगता है! बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने!

 

@ divsi : aapki jitni drishti hai, kripya utne tak hi seemit rahein...:p now end of topic!!

P.S.: what is hr?

 

@ babli : bahut bahut shukriya aapka...aapse bahut prerna milti hai...:)

 

@ divsi : hey 1st of all i like ur blog vry much.. its awesum!!!
n abt our mr. shayar.. ask him onli.. he'll tell..
umesh tell hr na :P

 

@ rimple : Don't worry ... i'l tell her aaram se..in full detail :p

@ divsi : Please don't bother! :p

 

@ rimple: thnx dear:) glad u like it! N we shall have a detailed conversation bout this sumwer else. Don't wori! :) coz this git won't tell me at all! The bhompu I m:p

And umesh jeeee u r off the topic now. Coz me n rimple are in the topic now:)
Tata! Mr. hr

 

Really nice lines Umesh.
Good to see the shayar in you.

 

@ grace: thanks a lot pallavi...shayari is my strong area actli...n it was divsi who encouraged me to start posting them on d blog...read d others also if u can, u might like them as well :)

 

Good conversation btw u,divsi and rimple :)

lolz over hr thing.. ;)

 

@divsi : yaa sure.. its ma pleasure.. n i'll b glad to tell u..:):)
@umesh : sorry..lolzz!!n don evn tk pain of tellin her aaraam se.. i'll do tht job vry nicely!!

 

@ mahesh: haha:) ye dekho umesh ji HR nahi jaante:p

 

@ DIVSI, mahesh and rimple:
BAS HO GAYA!! :( :(

 

theek hai theek hai...itna udaas mat ho..
but temme tere pichle comment main MEERA name BOLD main kyun tha?? bolo bolo:P
hehehe! i m lovin this!
looks like i m hell bent to make a century of comments on this YAADGAAR post:p

 

@ divsi: tumhara naam bold me isliye kyunki baaki ke do log samajhdar hai, ek baar me samajh jaate hain..tumhe emphasize karke samjhana padhta hai!!

 

hawwwww:( inni in-salat!?:p