On his way to the hospital, he was thinking about the beautiful times he had spent with her. On reaching her ward, he saw her unconscious and his eyes drifted to the bed besides her. The tears started flowing…
….they were tears of happiness. He had just become a proud father of a baby girl…
9 comments:
Best one. and totally unexpected turn too!
I fave this! :D
Hey Umesh, that was awesome man. I thought she was about to die. You got me there. Loved it. :-)
THAT WAS REALLY VERY CUTE AND WONDERFUL....:)
touching and just when u r sure its gonna be sad, it turns out to be happy, i like that...
Wow!..I was thinking.. Some tragedic end to a love story but then you took a U turn mannnn...Very good...
Now thats what i call a tremendous improvement :) ( did i just sound like Remo ke rangeele from D.I.D :P)
Cheers
Mahesh
Twist in the tale hmmm... .You did quite a good job at giving a jolt to your readers.And on the whole its very sweet.
@ everybody: sorry for the late reply to all your wonderful comments...
@ shaunak: thanks a lot :)..its my fav too :p
@ Karthik: thanks a tonne man..
@ meghana: thanks n keep visiting..
@ anita: i think this is ur first comment on my blog :)...glad you likd it..keep dropping in..
@ mahesh: thanks..i really needed to buck up after d disappointing one last time...im glad you found improvement dis time...
@ pallavi: well..55 fiction is all about twists..im glad u likd d one in dis story..:)
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